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Job: poultergheist
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that was hilarious. The animation and backgrounds were fantastic, as well as the character design. The sound was perfect, voices too, looked professional to me.
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i was just watching your stuff the other day wondering what happened to you. I'm glad you still make animations and post them here. Your storytelling is the best, and I love the moods your dramas create. Although this wasn't your best, it was still a great piece with some real effort.
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finally, a great series on Newgrounds that might actually be going somewhere. I hope you continue this series, i don't want this to end up as another Merry Melony or Fallen Angel! Great work, great style, graphics, etc. everything i could say has already been said.
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"shouldn't have had the space part"
the whole thing was great and really thought provoking- but that beginning space part you had with the rock music and the satellites kind of took away from the mood. The rest was just really nice and experimental, that part just didn't seem to fit. Nice job!!
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funny thing is, that's what it was when I started. but I didn't want to get rid of it, just to have something to contrast.
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you
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kiss kiss
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because actually, this looks very similar to an older animation called "paper wars"
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /65230
I'm not sure if you've seen this before or not, either way it was a little too similar for comfort. Also, the lines were sloppy, the animation was mediocre and the characters were not well drawn, or very appealing to look at. I appreciate the effort, but i think you could do a little more to improve your style and make it interesting, or at least your own thing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for watching, and showing me the link to that video. Neither Raskin nor I have seen Paper Wars, but you're right, the similarities are uncanny. I do think he did a great job with the same basic idea. The lines in my cartoon are meant to be sloppy because they are supposed to be skribbles, and I know I could do better on the animation. I was on a deadline for a festival so I worked as fast as I could. Again thanks for watching and the review.
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man i remember seeing your SeaT parody for the first time. Funny shit lulz!
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well this takes the prize for being the most original pico day submission, that's for sure. It was really fun to watch all the different endings, and i tried to avoid scene selection but eventually i got bored of watching the first part. Great collab!
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i mean i knew you were good, but i didn't know you were THAT good! You are gonna win some big time $$. This reminds me, i need to finish my muse part. And yes i will complete it i swear!! Great work.
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thanks a ton man :)
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"a lot of things wrong with this animation"
1. There was very little of your own original artwork, actually none since stick figures aren't original
2. This had incredibly little to do with the title, only in the very beginning and then it just seemed like you put that beginning in there to make it fit with the title, and the rest was just fight scene
3. I know it's inspired by Animator Vs. Animation, but it's a little TOO much like it. There were very few differences, you even had the reboot in there. The only real difference is that you had a different layout/icons you were using on your computer
4. Not that this really matters (and it doesn't detract from the score), but why would you search youtube in google instead of just typing youtube into your browser? Just wondering. This actually isn't anything wrong with the movie so maybe i shouldn't put it as wrong thing number 4 but whatever.
The camera movements were nice, the stick figure movement was nice, the cropping and moving images i can see probably took some work, as i've done that sort of animation before, but it just wasn't original or interesting, at least to me. You did however pull off the animator vs animation style well, to end on a good note.
Author's Response:
1. I love stick figures still...even after all the crappy things people have done to them
2. What?
3. I didn't take any ideas from AvA other than the setting
4. Google was there...so I used it
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