notorious's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[StagBeetle 03]

lmao i remember when this first came out

This is my favorite of the collection so far I think. I love 10 little stagbeetles, it's my favorite bedtime story <3

StagBeetle responds:

stagbeetles

[StagBeetle 02]

lmao stagbeetles

I love how you just resubmit the same shit you did before keep it up!

StagBeetle responds:

dont worry i will!

[More Hardcore Than Pico]

nice

Stuff like this makes newgrounds what it is. Wow, that was really well made and good, one thing you could improve on is the voices, they were hard to hear when the music was going. Otherwise, nice going!

[Ida's Luck - Part 1]

great graphics, great style, poor animation.

You always have a great way with style, and that makes the mood excellent. Your drawings are very detailed for the adult characters, too, and I find that excellent. However, your animation is poor, and i think is getting worse. Your animation in your first hit 'The Little Girl' was average, and not bad. But I think it's gotten worse over your animations, either that or you just haven't bettered it at all, which makes it seem worse. Please try to improve your animation, I look forward to more of your great characters and storytelling in the future!

[Space Duck]

holy shit

Some of the greatest fbf I've ever seen! Keep it up!

[Meat Grinder]

awesome

reminded me somewhat of a Kol-Belov animation. Great colors, great scenery and animation, great artwork especially.

[KAZAHANA:Death of Formula]

wow i actually watched it all

I sat through all of that, so now i feel i have earned my right to review.
First of all, the first thing that comes to mind when I think of the bad parts of this animation is the lipsyncing. That was drop dead terrible. You REALLY need to better your lipsyncing, in some parts it didn't even look like whoever was talking was actually talking. The second thing is the voice acting, not like I was expecting anything different for something anime, almost all anime animations have those same voices. Except for the black haired girl, she had a different voice, which is why I gave the sound a 2 and not a 0. Other than that, sometimes the characters didn't look very natural or right or whatever, for instance, at the hospital, the black haired girls breasts looked a bit weird, I had to laugh at that. Another thing is the poor script writing, sometimes you had one or two words of dialogue that were out of place in a scene, or seemed just to be there to make it painstakingly obvious what was going on, for example, the part where the branch falls when the two women are fighting, and the black haired one says "poison" was out of place (or at least I thought) and was unnecesarry. There were several places where I found this happening, but sometimes it was actually quite funny, hence the Humor score. You know, you don't have to be like Xin Session. You have the power, early enough in your series, to make something actually interesting with good animation, where Xin Session failed. I can already tell you know how to animate, the animation wasn't too bad, lots of movement and action, but I'd like to see some improvements, ESPECIALLY with the lipsyncing.

[im a fuckin fag]

lolzzzzz

u did an animation for a marylin manson song. Gh3y 2 the xtremz. Tiem 4 helpful review commentary:

Graphics: They were ok. Nothing new. I guess. They were pretty ok.

Style: lolz where's the style dunno didn't see none loloz XDDDD

Sound: Marylin GAYface

Violence: Gay

Interactivity: None it was a vid

Humor: Lol you did a marylin manson vid

Overall: Because it sucks

taylor-bortner responds:

thanks

[A&K Battle Rocks]

not the greatest

I liked your preloader, that was about the best part of the whole movie. Other than that, it was pretty boring. You had characters with no limbs, which is the cheapest way to animate things, there were no sound effects, just music, no change of scene, and when the characters did actions such as jumping, it looked a bit odd and not natural. Oh yeah, not to mention I didn't see any change of facial expression, or any rotation of any character whatsoever. It was all stale, and WAY too flat.

[TooF TCvST2]

wtf is right

wtf was that? I didn't understand what the hell was going on when the fight scene started. Somehow the worst band in the world appeared, then toof cruise and solid gay toof started fighting for no reason. Why are they fighting? How the hell did they get in the desert? I think, the fact that you put them falling down in the desert is to compensate for your complete lack of any change of scene. If you wanted to make a good change of scene, you could of at least had it make sense, dude. You need to rework your graphics, they're too simple now, do some animating, and plz put in some sort of better plotline, if you're at least going to try to have one at all.

MACception responds:

Dude, listen to the convo between Solid and TooF over the CB, he says that he's always wanted to beat him, and he'll say why later.

The whole desert scene was meant to be random. I wanted to do a classic action-movie-style change-up, so I threw that in.

I agree on your graphic thing, but, seriously how do you make a tooth in a mouth look better? Limitations are reached rather quickly :)

Thanks for the review man.