notorious's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[KAZAHANA:Death of Formula]

wow i actually watched it all

I sat through all of that, so now i feel i have earned my right to review.
First of all, the first thing that comes to mind when I think of the bad parts of this animation is the lipsyncing. That was drop dead terrible. You REALLY need to better your lipsyncing, in some parts it didn't even look like whoever was talking was actually talking. The second thing is the voice acting, not like I was expecting anything different for something anime, almost all anime animations have those same voices. Except for the black haired girl, she had a different voice, which is why I gave the sound a 2 and not a 0. Other than that, sometimes the characters didn't look very natural or right or whatever, for instance, at the hospital, the black haired girls breasts looked a bit weird, I had to laugh at that. Another thing is the poor script writing, sometimes you had one or two words of dialogue that were out of place in a scene, or seemed just to be there to make it painstakingly obvious what was going on, for example, the part where the branch falls when the two women are fighting, and the black haired one says "poison" was out of place (or at least I thought) and was unnecesarry. There were several places where I found this happening, but sometimes it was actually quite funny, hence the Humor score. You know, you don't have to be like Xin Session. You have the power, early enough in your series, to make something actually interesting with good animation, where Xin Session failed. I can already tell you know how to animate, the animation wasn't too bad, lots of movement and action, but I'd like to see some improvements, ESPECIALLY with the lipsyncing.

[A&K Battle Rocks]

not the greatest

I liked your preloader, that was about the best part of the whole movie. Other than that, it was pretty boring. You had characters with no limbs, which is the cheapest way to animate things, there were no sound effects, just music, no change of scene, and when the characters did actions such as jumping, it looked a bit odd and not natural. Oh yeah, not to mention I didn't see any change of facial expression, or any rotation of any character whatsoever. It was all stale, and WAY too flat.

[Sidewalk Short #2]

short, but nice.

It was very short, but the graphics were good and the animation (when there was animation) was good as well. The music fit the cartoon well, good job!

[#POTLUCK]

that was so fucked up

I love it! wow! That was really abstract and completely messed up, subtitles didn't have anything to do with what they were saying, and the style and colors looked great, as well as the animation! The funniest part was when they shoved meat up the ghost's ass!

[The Red Line]

perfect omg perfect

this is a GREAT and amazingly original animation! The graphics are awesome and the whole idea for a collab like this is really cool! I LOVE how it went from one person to another, I LOVE the idea, I loved everything about this!