that was amazing
you have true talent. Things i liked about this were:
1. The lighting effects you used
2. Your hand-drawn artwork
3. Your ability to make a 10 minute flash without pointless violence
4. The small amount of time it took to make 24 chapters WITH different acts.
The one thing i didn't like was that there was no-one talking. But i kind of do like the comic book style and its cool not knowing what their voices sound like.