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[StagBeetle Goes Fishing]

hey

you

StagBeetle responds:

kiss kiss

[Doodlequest]

not actually that creative

because actually, this looks very similar to an older animation called "paper wars"

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /65230

I'm not sure if you've seen this before or not, either way it was a little too similar for comfort. Also, the lines were sloppy, the animation was mediocre and the characters were not well drawn, or very appealing to look at. I appreciate the effort, but i think you could do a little more to improve your style and make it interesting, or at least your own thing.

pthouse responds:

Thanks for watching, and showing me the link to that video. Neither Raskin nor I have seen Paper Wars, but you're right, the similarities are uncanny. I do think he did a great job with the same basic idea. The lines in my cartoon are meant to be sloppy because they are supposed to be skribbles, and I know I could do better on the animation. I was on a deadline for a festival so I worked as fast as I could. Again thanks for watching and the review.

[Operation: Warehouse]

Daz holy shit

i mean i knew you were good, but i didn't know you were THAT good! You are gonna win some big time $$. This reminds me, i need to finish my muse part. And yes i will complete it i swear!! Great work.

Jeinu responds:

thanks a ton man :)

[The Anger of Animation 3]

a lot of things wrong with this animation

1. There was very little of your own original artwork, actually none since stick figures aren't original

2. This had incredibly little to do with the title, only in the very beginning and then it just seemed like you put that beginning in there to make it fit with the title, and the rest was just fight scene

3. I know it's inspired by Animator Vs. Animation, but it's a little TOO much like it. There were very few differences, you even had the reboot in there. The only real difference is that you had a different layout/icons you were using on your computer

4. Not that this really matters (and it doesn't detract from the score), but why would you search youtube in google instead of just typing youtube into your browser? Just wondering. This actually isn't anything wrong with the movie so maybe i shouldn't put it as wrong thing number 4 but whatever.

The camera movements were nice, the stick figure movement was nice, the cropping and moving images i can see probably took some work, as i've done that sort of animation before, but it just wasn't original or interesting, at least to me. You did however pull off the animator vs animation style well, to end on a good note.

KobraEditing responds:

1. I love stick figures still...even after all the crappy things people have done to them

2. What?

3. I didn't take any ideas from AvA other than the setting

4. Google was there...so I used it

[It's Still Me]

what

really, this kind of looks like a lame excuse for the fact that you had no new ideas whatsoever. You made a bunch of random short shit and compiled it together, a bunch of sloppy doodles that weren't even filled in most of the time. Seriously, I've seen this before from you and it's getting pretty old. Make more animations that look like you actually put effort into, like -LSD-DMT-, that was actually pretty good. I'm getting pretty tired of this random weird crap.

At least some of the graphics were ok.

Sqeezy responds:

i care?

[From Life to Death]

ehhhh

i'm sorry, the background gradient colors were really nicely done, and the animation was ok, it's just that the characters and objects were just really sloppy and not well done. The characters looked so unfinished, like test drawings, and not good ones either. That kind of test drawing look you had looked especially bad when you combined it in scenes with fully drawn and colored in objects like the coffin, it just looked like laziness to me. Also, a few things ruined the mood, like the obnoxious Newgrounds license plate in their, it seems like every flash nowadays is getting branded with NG somewhere in it. Also you misspelled 'loneliness' which you could have easily looked up.

Aside from that, I thought it was going to be just another one of those stories where you see the life of one person from birth to death that's really unoriginal, but i did like the fact that you had the stories of the different generations intertwined, that's something I haven't seen before. Ok piece just put a bit more effort in.

ReklessCreati0n responds:

Hey thanks for your review, its probably the most intuitive review i've seen in a while... Yeah I keep forgetting to fix the spelling error, the character drawings were of choice, in a way they kinda were WIP's but the people that I showed to said they perferred it that way. If I was to do everything in full color, I was afraid it would have brought away from the meaning. But who knows.

Thanks for the review and vote.

[Anusboy]

seventy slippery seals slide slowly syringe

my good sir what you have done here is not only the epitome of science it is the epitome of the world itself. Having combined two forces of the greatest caliber you have decidedly unleashed an evil so unspeakably evil yet blatantly obvious that it is a miracle no man has discovered this until now. Now, onto the main thesis;

This creation was indescribably different from any sort of indescribable sort of mess I have seen in my lifetime. It was at its uttermost peak, and could not have been thought of better without the proper licensing of a full-time psychiatrist. It is clear here you know your facts about the human body and have therefore combined your efforts in a collaboration of the mind to present this amazing, jaw-dropping spectacle for mankind. You have been fruitless in your efforts, and now it is only the community who is at fault for not rewarding you with endless riches.

It appears to me that anybody who does not agree with the stated quote in this project, and I quoth, "He who does righteous unto his disciples will have righteous done unto him", Is an utter moron, led to believe in his own stupidity. These people, namely 'SUPAOWNER' need to be more elaborate in their ways of discussion, for if you can not raise a good debate in the argument, you are but one of many who have fallen into the sad trap of consciencelessness.

In this brief (but rewarding) essay, I have summarized all of J.P. Willinger's main ideas, points, and descriptions and have clearly crowded them into three small paragraphs. I hope you will attain as much knowledge as I did out of this project, and to all of you who are unwilling to go about your days in harmony, I say good day to you!

W-P-S responds:

This has to be one of the best reviews ever

[Money (Thats what i want)]

not bad

certainly more visually interesting than your other stuff, more stylish and fun to watch.

I enjoyed this music video over many of your normal animations with dialogue, as this one looked much cleaner and artistically better.

good job

eddsworld responds:

Glad ive finally made a flash you've enjoyed :)