great animation
animation looked semi-professional, if not professional. Fun story, great character design and art, great traditionally designed animation.
great animation
animation looked semi-professional, if not professional. Fun story, great character design and art, great traditionally designed animation.
i kept waiting for it
i kept waiting for it, something decently drawn, something well animated, anything that was well done. I never got it. I have no idea why the score of this is so high, WHY the review score is so high, or why it is so worshipped. It's not funny, but that's the least of its problems. How can sloppy, lazy drawn stick figures, with robotic voices and what you could hardly consider a 'plot' get a 4.14??? What is wrong with you people?? There are so many more things much deserving of this score, and yet they are ranked far lower, and nobody sees them, even though they are so much better and much more effort was put into them than this. Please, this is just ridiculous. Something that's only good for a few cheap laughs should not get a 4.14. Improve on your drawing skills and your animation. Newgrounds, you never fail to dissapoint.
morbid
that was hilarious. The animation and backgrounds were fantastic, as well as the character design. The sound was perfect, voices too, looked professional to me.
finally! you've returned
i was just watching your stuff the other day wondering what happened to you. I'm glad you still make animations and post them here. Your storytelling is the best, and I love the moods your dramas create. Although this wasn't your best, it was still a great piece with some real effort.
breathtaking
finally, a great series on Newgrounds that might actually be going somewhere. I hope you continue this series, i don't want this to end up as another Merry Melony or Fallen Angel! Great work, great style, graphics, etc. everything i could say has already been said.
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not actually that creative
because actually, this looks very similar to an older animation called "paper wars"
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /65230
I'm not sure if you've seen this before or not, either way it was a little too similar for comfort. Also, the lines were sloppy, the animation was mediocre and the characters were not well drawn, or very appealing to look at. I appreciate the effort, but i think you could do a little more to improve your style and make it interesting, or at least your own thing.
Thanks for watching, and showing me the link to that video. Neither Raskin nor I have seen Paper Wars, but you're right, the similarities are uncanny. I do think he did a great job with the same basic idea. The lines in my cartoon are meant to be sloppy because they are supposed to be skribbles, and I know I could do better on the animation. I was on a deadline for a festival so I worked as fast as I could. Again thanks for watching and the review.
anyone, can animate
man i remember seeing your SeaT parody for the first time. Funny shit lulz!
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