notorious's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Time in a Bottle]

booooo this sucks

fraggles animates way better than u srry

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

I KNOW OMG, HE DRAWS LINES AND EVERYTHING.
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[Anamnesis]

a little dissapointed in the drawings

I started watching this and noticed the little explosions of brown in the beginning thinking 'wow, this guy really knows how to animate!' unfortunately, much of the animation skill is lost itself if you can't draw as well as you can animate. As the animation progressed, it looked like the drawings of the characters were a little stiff, and were drawn a little sloppy. It wasn't expected that you'd be able to draw the characters exactly as well as the artists who created them did, but the inconsistency of drawing skill was quite noticeable. For example; why are the tankmen and bitey drawn so well when pico and salad fingers look so sloppy?

on the plus side, this was organized well and fit excellent with the music, overall your animation skill seems to outshine your drawing skill, which is actually quite unusual. It looks like some decent effort was put into this so good job on that.

indigoApe responds:

thanks for the review, it was a rush job as I only managed to finish this a few hours before submitting it. I thank you for the tips and I must still remind you this is only my 3rd submission.

have a great '08. <3

[Clown Show]

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lmfao wow that was great uhmmm same as always zekeyyyy keep up the good work love the style etc u know whut the deal iz

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

Your new improved dick is only a week's delivery away!

["Symphony"]

ironic

how the clock crew slogan you used at the end is 'self expression at its finest' when really if you're a clock crew member you're not allowed all the virtues of self expression as you are represented by a symbol with a clock face and your name must end with 'clock'. It's probably the least self expressing crew out there, as you must conform to be a part. And if not, well then a shit load do conform anyways.

Anyways the movie was great. Awesome fbf, nice textured background, a little short and i don't tend to like clock movies as most of them basically just revolve around 'the greatness of being a clock' but at least this one was visually interesting.

[Der Eskimo Tanz]

hahahhah

i love how some of the subtitles are completely wrong lmao

great work, keep it up, etc etc

[A Beautiful Life]

holy crap

this is some professional work. Great use of lighting, story etc. keep it up!

[TOFA Collection]

hey bub

good to see something of yours not Weird Al related

The ideas for this were great, though your animations have an overall tendency to look sloppy. Clean up your linework a bit, maybe try thicker lines and all should be fine. The animation aspect of it was great.

RWappin responds:

Thanks. :D

My drawings have always been kinda sketchy but all these were also made in a span of just 1 or 2 days each so you'll have to excuse their scribblyness. I gotta work on making my stewfs smoother.